A lot of stuff to fix
Pretty good work there mel. I always liked your fbf and your ideas are pretty cool. But you should seriously fix the preloader before submitting! And the music transitions were very weird.
A lot of stuff to fix
Pretty good work there mel. I always liked your fbf and your ideas are pretty cool. But you should seriously fix the preloader before submitting! And the music transitions were very weird.
It's still not finished. I plan to finish it once exams are over and I move out of my dorm room
Good fun!
I like the main characters and the story is pretty intesting. Your animation is really good, and the sound is much better than in the first episode (still needs some work, maybe less compressing when exporting). I think some jokes need to go at a faster pace to be funnier, but seriously, I can't wait for the next episode. Nice work and don't stop now!
Yeah, the episode was a bit rushed, but I'm learning =)
Episode 3 is already written (I know where i'm going with the story and certain events are already set, makes it easier) Hopefully episode 3 will be done arround august.
I appreciate the review, and coming from you it even means more, thanks!
Nice Flash, Wonchop!
Hi Wonchop! This was a great flash, i've had many laughs. I would have given a better score if the sound was not as scratchy in some parts. Hope you have a merry Xmas!
Yeah, well most of that was recorded with my old microphone. I got a new one so hopefully it should be a little better in the future. Thx man.
Nice!
Hey Joe!
That was a really nice piece of work. The graphics are really top-notch. The flash was really fluid and flawless. The only problem I had is that I would have liked to see a deeper story. A deeper Evolution. More details on the story.
Really nice! (BTW, music kicked ass)
aLeXLaBbE
Excellent... thank you!
...but who the flip is Joe!?
<3
I liked it
LIke Julio Vega said. U need to make the things which appear in the song. And that really kinda broke the fun of it. But I liked the animation. Very well made. Dont stop now you are a great artist!
*sniff* thanks ^^
Flash has been a huge part of my life. I've been making short toons on Newgrounds for many years now, and it has influenced me in many ways. I would like to thank all the great people I met here and all the positive feedback they gave me. Thank you!
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